Howdy Marc....

Thanks for listening and the detailed comments/observations.
I appreciate them all and see your point regarding the perceived 'overstretching' description.
I'll have to avoid that oversight on my next one. smile

Originally, I had completed lyrics written for the chorus which I was pleased with.
But...just before posting the mix I assessed the song again.
Hmmmm.....I culled them all and decided they were unnecessary and verbose with respect to the 'theme'.
(I'll use then in another tune :))

I know, my subject choice for this one is not a mainstream one.
Hence, I'll always be a song writing bottom feeder. smile

Thanks again....

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