This is good, your vocals are not bad at all. And I know what you mean ... I'm always very self-conscious of my vocals. There's always something they don't sound like that I want them to sound like. Ok, usually.
And I like the lyrics.
Howdy Phil...
Chuckle.....I hear you.
What I hear in my head always
seems to sound far better than what I track.
A huge creative disconnect on my part.
I thank you for taking the time to listen and the favorable comments.
Have a good one....