Originally Posted By: HearToLearn
And...my quickly thrown together take.

First off, WOW!

Moving on, there is SO much I could say again; I'll be brief. I SO appreciate this song! You are the master of the story telling song; but this my friend, goes a new direction. It has the appeal to anyone that would listen to it. It could be anyone's story! Just awesome.

Really NIT picking : There's a weird little volume drop at 43 seconds.

Short notes :

Love, love, love the groove.
The drums come in PERFECTLY
Nice effect of the break before chorus
Love the emphasis on "all"
1:51 tasty drums! You placed that really well!
"heart and soul" really great that the music hits for emphasis
Nice, big, open chorus! As in, REALLY nice!
Guitar solo is on point...and love how it goes into the breakdown.
Oh how I love the pad in the breakdown. Ads a ton of atmosphere!
Love the guitar at For the outro.

Totally pro sounding. Man, what a cool song! Which begs the question, who are you selling this to? smile


C - thanks for this great review! (thrown together as it was smile )

I went back and checked that volume drop (I heard it once you mentioned it). It was only the vocal that dropped - which was me, of course, unintentionally. I muted the vocal and the other tracks maintain their volume. Something about that vocal drop made it have the illusion of everything dropping a little...

Selling it? HA! like THAT is possible these days!!! Got a couple of bucks - we can make a deal...

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