Originally Posted By: Jim
A pleasant whimsical creation...
Your lyrical story & delivery adds to the cunning and capriciousness of your work...
I really like the lines...

The intention of fate
baffled Hawking as well
defying any
reasoning.

The secret unsolved,
the meaning of her hints
in my coffin I'll be
wondering.


Really cool writing...
How in the world did you come up with this great satirical thought?"
I really enjoyed the listen!


Thanks Jim for your very nice and insightful comment smile I'm especially happy you liked that last verse, I have read that Stephen Hawking has said that the biggest mystery he couldn't solve was women, so it was quite natural to refer his thought here smile

Janne


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