Hi Dave,

I've learned that it is not the best idea to write that you not satisfied with a song you introduce to a new audience, because you get the people who listen to feel that they should be able to find some faults or bad things within the song, because the composer "said that himself".

I've posted songs that I was not satisfied with and got some positive critique and I have posted songs I liked a lot and have been told that they were lacking quality. You never know how the audience will react!

I tried to listen to your song without any negative pre-feelings and I actually really liked it. Your song reminded me of a young Terence Trent D'Arby... your track has the same kind of energy I felt when listening to his early songs.

I don't know what it is about the sound that you don't like - I think you have done a good job here!

Thanks for sharing,
Will