The best way to get other people to listen to and comment on your music is for you to listen and comment on theirs.
Yes, I get that... That's why these things generally flow over my head.
Though I do try and listen and comment, I know I haven't been particularly active on the forum and tend to just "hit & run" when I've done new recordings... My bad.
I listened to your song, good song, I liked the lyrics, also nice guitar work and strong vocal. Mix sounded good too, although I'm not on my music computer at the moment so not listening through the studio monitors.
Thanks for the comments.
I've re-recorded the vocal this morning and altered the mix to bring the vocal out more and some of the guitar parts were treading on each other (and on the vocals) so I've moved them to the sides a bit.
Problem is that after a while I never know if it's sounding "better" or just different from last time I heard the playback.