Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
but I do not agree on "No motif" part with him. I find these type of tunes meditative and enjoyable.Misha.


Howdy Misha.....

I do not mean to belabor a point or take issue with your opinion.
But....to be clear this is what I mean by motif:

"In music, a motif (pronunciation) (help. · info) (also motive) is a short musical phrase, a salient recurring figure, musical fragment or succession of notes that has some special importance in or is characteristic of a composition: "The motive is the smallest structural unit possessing thematic identity".

I do not hear a clear motif in musician17's composition....yet.
If you do, based on the above definition you have far better ears that I do.
I'm sure he'll flesh it out further to his satisfaction or maybe he doesn't care about a motif at all....that's OK too.
He's got a good foundation idea....just needs a structural massage which is what I'm trying to help with.

Nothing I say here he (or anyone) has to agree or comply with....I just provided my honest assessment based on his thread request.
I'll gladly listen again if he revives this thread with an update on the composition.

A good day to all....

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