Good one Jim,
A pretty polished package.
The multistyle arrangement is a great way to avoid making the narrative maudlin or corny.
There are a few artifacts on your vocal that the processing has accentuated - a click here, some essing there which I reckon you ought to tidy up when you get the time because the song is worth it.


Cheers
rayc
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