Hans,
Awesome tune! This is the best one to my taste, from others you presented here.
Good lyrics, interesting arrangement and performance! Certainly your artistic muscles are getting more flexible smile

The only suggestion I have, is try to glue vocals more to the rest of the mix. It is tricky. (One of most challenging thing for me). Your tune is solid, I feel by interweaving vocals will put it level above.

Thank you for sharing!

Misha.