Dan it sounded great to me. I'd also dump the double vocal. I'd duplicate the vocal twice. Split one to far left and one to far right. The 3rd leave dead center. Move the control of all 3 thracks to sub-group2. In sub-group2 select a compressor of your choice. Add the 10 band EQ. In the EQ drop the 1st 2 on the left to the 0. Move the 3rd down about 50%. Leave the rest alone.

Add a reverb of your choice. Set it to a touch, say, 10 -15 % mix.

Now mix them well until you're satisfied with the quality of the vocal track.

That will do the trick.

One last thing. I picked up on a lot of puffing when any letter sound was a P, B or sometimes a T. Means you're too close to the mic. Keep it about 6 inches away from your mouth or put a windsock on the mic to cut down puffing.

Just my 2¢ worth.

Russ
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