Much better, Dan! Keep at it with the vocals - the more you record it, the more you will feel it and swing with it. Keep each take and then you can cobble the bits together that work best at each part to create a finished whole with all the best pieces. Also you will become more and more familiar with the song.

Also, (in RB) try using the Male Vocal FX on the track - just right click on the track label and you will find them there. A lot of the time, they work very well without any tweaking whatsoever.

As to the warm water, I prefer a drink myself!

Follow That Dream

Sam
Karaoke King

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Turning that corner again - I have to keep following that dream, no matter what