Citaat:

Can I suggest that before you sing the vocals, have a drink of room-temperature water. Doing so really eases the vocal chords.





That is very good advice indeed. In fact, here's an article why a singer should do that. here's an article

As for the song: Rockstar-not just about sums it all up.
I think you made very good attempt here. Definatly has a nice, laid back feel to it. Good job.