Originally Posted By: Noel96
Hi Jim,

This is a restful, very pleasant listen. I'm enjoying it.

I'm a fan of the AAAX rhyme scheme that you've used in the chorus. It's such an excellent asymmetric rhyme pattern. At the moment, I'm sitting here listening and typing and your song is bringing into my mind images of all that's good in life. Thank you heaps for that!

All the best,
Noel

Thanks, Noel...
For your continued compliments & support...
I hadn't really considered the "AAAX rhyme scheme" before you mentioned it...
I was just going with what the good Lord gave me smile


Jim
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