Ray,
"coal powered soul searching." (!) exellent line for next song (will ask permission to use it)

Thank you for your support and excellent comments!
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Torrey,
Thank you for listening and kind words. I always appreciate your feedback!
One day, when I have something worthy, I will find the courage of asking you to join

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Belladonna, Thank you for listening and nice comments! Hmm, I never thought about doing Metal music. Maybe I should give it a try

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Greg, Thank you for taking time to listen and your support!
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Hans, Thank you for your positive comments. And BIG thanks for comment on SC. You are right! I listened to this next day and all frequency was all over the place. Will have to sit with the mix a bit longer.
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FJ, Thank you for your time and nice words!
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Bob, Thank you for excellent feedback on lyrics! I initially thought of doing a parody on morbid subject, but it came out a bit darker than I anticipated

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Jim, you are too kind!
Well, I have a degree in arts (not music related) I have done sculpture for some years...clay, bronze...but who need arts these days?

The ships had left their bays,
their wooden structures obsolete, by standards of today
and yet, their ghosts are present in my dreams...
their flags are wobbling high, they're played by passing winds,
like cat is playing with it's prey, then stops...when life is gone.
The sacred empty space of soul that can't be filled with fashion, food or gold,
like language that was lost, as weathered tombstone.
I have no say in this, I watch the cycle with a hint of mirth,
at times I wish I could... swim back in time,
like crayfish, backwards,
from the death to birth.
Jim, see what you made me do...?

I only wrote about a dozen of things in English prior joining this forum. I listen to songs, read lyrics, get help with my text here, it works

Thank you for your support!
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Dave, sorry it has to be "dark" vocabulary, next time I will try to make something up with positive meaning

Thank you for kind words!
Misha.