Ai Ray, that came in, but that's what this forum is for. Giving feedback.
And yes, I hesistated about that choir as well, as I said in one of my posts before.
But the majority found it nice, even your friend Misha.

I didn't hear that crack you mentioned. I'll check it later again. Today I've heard the song too much.
And abouth my upward swing I hadn't noticed till you mentioned it. I was more busy with getting the two recordings of my voice align properly.
And yes, these lines were false rhymes, but because of the speed of singing I chose to do it like I did. Otherwise the words would sound too made up.

Thanks for your remarks, but read what Bob Dean has to say ;-) (this is a joke)
But thanks Bob!

Bye,
Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130