Hi Jim, John and Steve,

Thanks for all your nice and wise words.
I silently changed the song again. The backgroudchoir is removed. I already had doubts about it, some of you have said that too.
I'm afraid the choir did not strengthened the song and the lyrics. Just like you say, Steve.
And John, I gave some extra reverb to that sax. More is maybe too much.

And Jim, I realy like the tought you listened several times to this song. You can't get it out of your head now, don't you?

Thanks again,
Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130