Lovely. The instruments joining the band as the song went on lifted it. Maybe it's just my ears or phones, but the vocals were too quiet in the mix. Why? You have a good voice with a lot of character and (at least from the portions I could hear) were delivering a lyric well worth the time to listen. Was it an artistic decision to emphasize "vanish"? I wish you'd made a different one, but that's just one opinion.


BIAB 2021 Audiophile. Windows 10 64bit. Songwriter, lyricist, composer(?) loving all styles. Some pre-BIAB music from Farfetched Tangmo Band's first CD. https://alonetone.com/tangmo/playlists/close-to-the-ground