Originally Posted By: Robertkc
This is subtle and finely written -those humorous lines about Harlequin the crow bring just the right touch of lightness.I was drawn in to the mindset - totally convincing.
I like the guitar blend -acoustic/electric. Would be nice to see which tracks you used.
The ending works well.
I found your vocals a bit less distinct on the chorus than verses -harmonies are good, I was struggling to hear the lyrics though.

Robert
Thank you Robert. I tried to address your comment about the vocal.