David,

I'm late to the party with listening to this one. It's great! The piano is the perfect choice for backing. Those chords that came and landed with your inspiration are wonderful. In addition, these lyrics are terrific. I love the way that they flow and how you've used pace to separate verses and choruses... really, REALLY well done.

I have to say that beginning the song with two choruses is very effective.... inspired arranging!

All the best,
Noel


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