I listened to you song again...
All I can say is it is one heck of a good song...
I do have a question...
Why did you choose the order of words...
"You belong to a man rich and powerful"
Instead of
"You belong to a rich and powerful man"?
Just curious to know your reason or reasons.
Thanks Jim,
I don't know if you're putting me on because you are a very good songwriter.
We all approach it a little differently I guess.
My first answer would be, I wrote it that way because I like the sound of it
and it's not like a thousand other writers would say it.
My second answer is accents in melody,
anyone can SEE
way you MOVE
theres no CHANCE
belong to a MAN
plus the bonus of using the old "win your hand" to make
an internal rhyme with man
hopes this is a decent answer to your question