Very cool. Did you try to get the sax from real band? It does an amazing job on stuff like that. It's not playing the melody just comping around the chords...and that's what RB sax tracks excel at doing.

Singer sounds good. And nice job on the write. At one time when I was with TAXI I was writing in a similar manner. The listing would give a description and I'd try to write to it. It's a great learning experience and guaranteed to get you out of your rut and comfort zone. I'll post up an example of one that I wrote for this very thing in as little bit. Keep your eye on the showcase.


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