this is special

[quote=Greg Johnson]WOW!! So well done. So emotive....great vocal. Some really powerful lyrics. Particularly like:

I see the key to my apartment door
on the countertop next to the ring you wore

Great way to tell the story!

I agree with what Greg says here,

my small suggestion is that after the falsetto on you say it's gone, maybe it's gone

I'd put a short instrumental part because to me it takes away some of the impact

of the falsetto on the chorus (which is just great)

just my two cents

a great write, great melody, great vocal

Kenny