Interesting listen.

I wasn't a big fan of the reverb on the piano - it has a very lo-fi sound to it and some odd bass notes around 1:47.

It sounds like there's some odd phasing going on with the strings.

I'm personally a fan of mixes where the instruments sound like they're in the same space, so the contrast between the space the strings were in vs. the piano space was a bit off-putting.

What did you use for the strings? There's an interesting "screech" you get out of them in the end.

All said - interesting listen. Poor Smoochie. smile

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Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?