Hi Rob,


I enjoyed listening. The writing, presentation and final production are excellent.

My favourite lines were...

"In time you'll forget me a long lost tragedy
As I lay six feet beneath clay"

The rhyme between 'forget me' and 'tragedy' is very fresh and my ears loved hearing it and image of lying 6' beneath clay was very vivid!

Terrific work!
Noel


MY SONGS...
Audiophile BIAB 2025