Hi Tommy,

That Doomed is a very nice style to get ideas from. You did a nice song with it.
Good sologuitar, nice sound. One minor thing: Cello and Rock can go along, I have no doubts about that, but the cello needs some space of its own (in a bridge, f.e.). Now it looks it is competing with the sologuitar (and loses...).
Its a bit a pitty I can only hear that instrument more in the beginning and the end. Maybe you make both instruments play more together (like 'answer-question').
But beside this remark I enjoyed listening to this song and thats what counts, isn't it?

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130