Originally Posted By: dcuny
Catchy song with a nice chorus! It's got a very 80s feel.

I enjoyed this listen. smile


OK, now for the critical bits. frown

My first thought is the same as Rob4580 - the vocal is too far back.

The vocal doesn't sound like it's in the same "space" as the instruments, and the vocal effect doesn't make things better - it sounds like a cheap reverb.

Instead of using a vocal effect, doubling (or tripling) your vocal might be a better idea.

The last few notes of the guitar solo sound off.

Here's the elephant I'm not very good at tip-toeing around: you've got pitch problems. There's nothing wrong with that - I'd never suggest that it prevent you from singing, or that your singing is bad.

But with pitch correction tools, it's fairly easy to find and fix pitch problems before anyone else hears them. smile

I've personally had more than a few sessions where I was sure I was singing on pitch, only to have the software show me I somehow drifted into the wrong key. sick

Anyway, I hope this hasn't discouraged you in any way. Keep up the good work!


I think David is pretty much spot on. Your mixing and use of the program really seem to be coming along! Doing some work on the vocals will bring this song a long ways!
Nice work!! Take care. Greg