I had to get used to it, but the song had something exciting in it.
Probably because of the kind of singing / vocals. That was realy good of you.

But saying that, this song could also use some more variation or 'shocks' (surprises), as I think Scott and David meant.
Than it holds your attention more easy.
But all together, you made an engaging song,

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130