Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Robert,

A unique look at the subject of parenthood (all your lyrics are so uniquely original). It progresses well. An interesting choice of backing - for the subject matter, I was not expecting something so "upbeat".

A good vocal. A good mix. There is almost a syncopation to the drums. I've never heard that from the NashvilleEven8 kit (perhaps you used pushes on the chords?).

Enjoyed the listen.

fj


Floyd,
The lyrics were half written many years ago with some of that exhausted euphoria many new parents feel still fresh. I had tried to turn it into a kind of Jackson Browne ballad, but it sounded kind of preachy... 30 years later maybe its easier to make it something lighter with brighter music.
Yes, there are a few pushes on the chords that give the drums that feel.
Thank you for your positive impressions.



Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Robert,
Beautiful tune and poetry! Man, have a way with words!
Enjoyed it much.

Thank you for sharing.
Misha.


Thank you very much, Misha!


Originally Posted By: PeterF
Robert

Nice work on this, not surprisingly poetic, and evocative. A nice relaxed vocal, and a good arrangement.

Very nice.

Peter


Peter,
I appreciate your listen and comments.

Originally Posted By: dcuny
Now that's what I've come to expect from you. A song that zigs where I expect it to zag, and makes me pay attention all the way through.

As others said, it's got a very poetic feel than a song.

Good stuff! laugh


David,
I`m ok with being the zig-zag wanderer!
Thanks for your listen.

Robert