I do like the lyric crafting and the phrasing. Musically, it sounds like a typical country song we've heard many times before.... but there's nothing wrong with that as the bridge adds interesting variation to the standard chord progression that is fairly predictable.

Yep... the lyric writing is what makes this shine.


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