Originally Posted By: rayc
Nice set of metaphors - a long way from the cliche's usually assigned to the subject.
Even more Tom Rapp than usual - that's an excellent thing.


Thanks for your comments- my cliche detector still sees a couple in this one, but sandwiched in more original lines, I can live with that.



Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Creative write as always!

One of your best vocals I think.

I really like the way you have been handling the background vocals on your last few songs, not sure if I mentioned that before. Very effective!

Also liked the arrangement and mix.

Good song, Robert, enjoyed!


Dave,
One of the best things about this forum is when listeners notice your efforts to improve. My harmonies get more attention to eq and my old friend cut-and-paste these days!
Thank you for the positive review.

Originally Posted By: MarioD
Robert, I think this is one of your best, if not the best, songs to date, both in lyrics and vocals.

Its all been said so all that I can add is WOW this is really good!



I appreciate that, Mario!

Originally Posted By: Jim
Great vocals on this one...
They really shine...
Perhaps it was the way you delivered the lyrics...
Whatever it was...
I certainly enjoyed listening to this one.


Jim,
I`m glad you liked this!

Robert