DB,
I think there's an excellent song in there but the intro is hard on the ears as it's so muddy & virtually mono.
The drums lean a little to the right, a the vocal a bit to the left and the rest seems up the middle.
I suggest doing the entire mix in mono as it'll give you a good idea of the muddiness and when to EQ things.
Sounds a little like Richard Hell & the Voidoids.
What parts are BIAB and what are you?


Cheers
rayc
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