Hey Ricky!

That's how I write music. Lots of people don't have music theory, but have lots in their head. Here's my critique of your song.

I like the first verse and chorus. I think the second should build a little with a more defined rhythm track.

In fact, this nice song would do without the weak strings, and with more power. You have written a wonderful country song, dude. Turn this into a power ballad. Let the song build to a crescendo. Emotionalize it.

You might want to write a bridge where the brief instrumental track runs. Just enough to lead back into the strong chorus.

Don't stop with this song. Polish it until it really jumps out and tears at the listener's heart.

I respect people who write original material, and my suggestions are only designed to help you see your song in a different way.

I hope you keep writing and sharing your songs with us. WTG!!!

Moo

If it has four legs and moos...it MIGHT be Mr Moohead.