Hey Moo - I agree with most of what you said. I couldn't figure out how to add more rhythm in the second verse and chorus without drums and I didn't like the sound of the drums with the strings. I probably could use a rhythm guitar instead of the drums but I am interested in your ideas first. Would rather have an instrumental solo as the bridge, but otherwise I am up for making the changes. Problem is, I don't have a clue what a power ballad means so I don't know what instrumental changes you are thinking of. Personally, the song right now doesn't fit with my personal style of songs I sing so making the changes you suggest sounds good. Let me know what you are thinking and I will try to make the changes.

Thanks again for your honest feedback.


Ricky

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