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I thought there was a forum for song posts but I can't seem to find it. I apologize if this is the wrong place to post this. Please let me know if there is a better place.

I wanted to get feedback on my first song with the software. I am not a musician so if you can think of better chords in any spots, please let me know. I am looking for feedback on all aspects of the song...lyrics, production, chord choices, etc. I don't have autotune so the vocal might be a bit pitchy in spots.

Thanks for everyone's input.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8582099



Ricky. If you'r no musician then I sure as heck ain't one either.

You didn't name the song so I can only assume it's the first song. And I can say you did a great job on it.

Just a couple of things that will help you on this.

1. You bring the sad feeling in your voice perfectly. But sustain a few of the ending phrases with your vox.

2. Spread the instruments out better. Pan the instruments around wider.

You definitely have a Garth Brooks sound going on with the second one.

Did you write all these songs? Did you do all of them in BIAB?

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