Hi Ricky,

The thoughts that came out of the song were of pureness and sincerity. I would not touch the arrangement if they were the two things you were going for. You hit it on the head. The flow was very clean in that I mean it was not crowded with too many words, too many notes, or an overdone vocal employing eccessive techniques (whiny, twangy, vibratos), etc. It was a very pleasing song that conveyed a mood of sadness which loss naturally brings about.

Very good. Look forward to hearing more in the future.

RickeG