Vice nice effort, sounds like you are having fun. Here is a little corrective critisms/suggestions based on my ears.

Too much pushed to the one side in the stereo field. At first I had to check my speakers to see if my balance was off. So check your L/R mix.

Simplify the guitar tones. Did I hear 3 different and unique guitar tones? The tune is long at over 5 minutes and with the differenct guitars it tends to breck the continuity.

Dump the harmonica plaer at the end. I don't feel he fits in with the overall vibe.

Just one mans opinion, others will vary . I do look forward to hearing more of your stuff in the future. Thanks for posting.

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