Strongly poetic lyric. I like the panning change for the two characters. The band is solid, and Scott's whammy is insane. Quite the adventurous listen.
Glad you thought the panned vocals work.Thanks for the positive comments.
THis is s SUPER creative song, and a SUPER song!!! Maybe my fave of yours Robert! And Scott's guitar really adds to the vibe! Wonderful, clever imaginative lyrics! A real treat all around!!! Take care. Greg
Greg,
This one sat in the file unheard by anyone for 30 years...just couldn`t see playing it at the open mic venues. Its nice to have a way to put it out now ( and throw in the line about iphones to bring it up to date!)
First listening to Scott`s whammy sound I wasn`t sure- now I think its amazing.
Thanks for your kind revue.
Robert