Well written song - the progression and lyric work a treat.
The vocalists seems too close to the mic - there's a bit of proximity effect and some serious sibilant stuff.
He's also too loud in the mix.
The guitar with the chorus effect on it seems louder & drags a bit compared to the sprightly cleaner guitar opposite.
The solo seems almost completely unrelated to the song - the tone and phrasing seem to sit above and not mesh with what's going on with the backing. With that jaunty Dire Straits style guitar on one side something more akin to it would've worked better for my ears/taste. As to the note & phrase choices of the RealTrack soloist - a listened closely a few times and it was hmmm...each time.
Again,
really good song, pretty good vocal performance that needs a little tweaking.
You've the components of a really cool track.

Cheers
rayc
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