That Amy...she knows what she is talking about!

I dunno... she seems to say that about everyone.

Somewhere along the way, I began to feel that the trumpet needed to "give it a rest". Literally. The phrasing of the melody (trumpet) is so continuous through the entire piece. It would be nice if some of the phrasing were shorter...perhaps with a change up of cadence now and again.
I've got the bad habit of filling up every bit of space with the melody, and I started out with the intent of doing the opposite.
And it doesn't help that the tune is longish in the first place.
Thanks for the feedback - I'll see if I can make some fixes to it tonight.