I saw you mention this in another post so I came to listen.

That's good solid southern gospel song. I could hear this in a church concert. Back in the day I wrote quite a few SG songs myself.

Good job with a few comments that you might find helpful.

Some things to consider on the production side of things.

Gospel features a lead singer and harmony singers.... really cool tight harmony. If you are going to use 3 vocal tracks for a lead... consider picking the best one or parts from the 3 to make one really kicking lead. Take your other 2 leads and pan them hard right and hard left and then lower the volume on them to the point that you really can't hear them. You should only be able to hear them with the tracks soloed. What this does, when done right is add a thickening to the sound of the lead vocal. Pay really close attention to the details. Especially on the phrasing. On the chorus, the first "Faith" had a distinct non-sync moment. I personally will record the section again....when that happens. Take the time to do your best to get the details right because that's what really makes a song shine. You and use volume envelopes to fix or hide things like that rather than recording it again. ( I use that shortcut a lot )

That's some nit picking stuff but, if you find it useful, it can be helpful.

Aside from the few minor issues, I really like this song and this style of music. Maybe I will have to dig back through some of my old stuff and find a few of those old songs and see what they sound like done right in BB.


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