Originally Posted By: rayc
Another fragile beauty Robert.
Musically no nits to pick.

Lyrically, and these are personal observations - I know lyric writing is a very individual thing - I found these two lines at odds with the rest of the piece:

"your masterpeice of art"

"burning rights with wrongs on a pyre"

I think it's becasue the idea of each line may be overstated given the rest of the lyric. Possibly more so with the 2nd line as it's followed with fire as well.

Lovely song.


Ray,
Thanks for the positive comments.
Back and forth on lyrics isn`t a place I like to go... but I really appreciate that you listen closely enough to consider them and have a response!



Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Very nice, Robert! You certainly have your own signature sound.

Lots of great lines, especially like:

"oceans in their eyes
making hard truth and lies"

Track sounds great too, enjoyed the listen.


Dave,
I guess my ballads have been distilling into a recognizable style over the years ( hopefully not a repetitive one).
I`m glad you enjoyed this.


Originally Posted By: Birchwood
Hi Robert,

Another very nice song of you with very good lyrics!
But thas nothing new... I'm already a fan of your songs.

Hans


Thank you! I try to keep fans of my songs happy...and yet not bored with "sounds like his last song" material.

Robert