Hey Superbron,

I like the song. Vocal highs in the chorus sound fine to me.

On some parts the lyrics don't flow too well. Perhaps drop/change a few words. The song could use some more dynamic: chorus can be more powerful. Overall mix sounds a bit thin to me.

This song has the potential to become a hit record. I really like the song and the song-idea. Work on it some more: you've got a good thing going here!