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On some parts the lyrics don't flow too well. Perhaps drop/change a few words. The song could use some more dynamic: chorus can be more powerful. Overall mix sounds a bit thin to me.

This song has the potential to become a hit record. I really like the song and the song-idea. Work on it some more: you've got a good thing going here!



That about nails it.
Great potential. Good vocals.

Mick