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On some parts the lyrics don't flow too well. Perhaps drop/change a few words. The song could use some more dynamic: chorus can be more powerful. Overall mix sounds a bit thin to me.

This song has the potential to become a hit record. I really like the song and the song-idea. Work on it some more: you've got a good thing going here!



That about nails it.
Great potential. Good vocals.

Mick




My opinion as well. Also, I agree on the vocal mix. It does sound a bit boomy at times... doesn't take away from a great sounding tune, though! Love the idea of it and it's got potential to be a real hit, IMHO!

Nice work. Like the progression, arrangement and especially the vocals!

Cheers,
Mike

PS: added this to one of my SoundClick stations.


Cheers,
Mike

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