Originally Posted By: jannesan
Grabbing intro, intriguing chording,
chorus melody has beauty in darkening
cryptic lyrics in the landscape of lust,
many nice details, nothing I'd adjust.
Janne

Janne,
a rhyming critique is, for me, unique.
Your generous praise has covered my eyes with a glaze.
THANKS


Cheers
rayc
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