My dear 'Ezekiel's Storm'...

Your music is about as 'ho-hum' as your lyrics are...and they just happen to be as thoughtful and time-stilling as a memory that just won't die.

There seems be a veritable explosion of excellent lyric writing on this forum, and you are one of the reasons why I make that statement:

"Emerald eyes and autumn hair..."

"Waking up to shadowed beams..."

These are gorgeously imaginative lines that describe deep and alternately tender/wounded feelings, nestled as they are in and amongst the rest of the words in the song that set such a palpable mood of love, but lost.

As you sang your bittersweet song, I couldn't help but revel in the thought of how well you communicated what was in your heart. I think an audience would not be likely to chat or talk while you performed, because of the quiet intensity with which you tell your sad story.

Structually speaking, the way you ended the song was ingeniously dramatic, the abrupt silence leaving a trembling hole in the air that shouted out the size of your loss. The Real Tracks under your direction were ideal purveyors of the mood suggested by your lyrics.

Think I'll start an 'Ezekiel's Storm' fan club, now... laugh !!!

LOREN



Last edited by bluage; 11/17/19 01:55 PM.
"Music is what feelings sound like."-- borrowed from a Cakewalk Music Creator forum member, "Mamabear".