|
Log in to post
|
Print Thread |
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712
Journeyman
|
OP
Journeyman
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712 |
Here is my latest contribution to the Showcase: https://soundcloud.com/user-952388172/lazy-dayzIt's a slow-medium bluesy piece with a touch of country. The melody is carried largely by Hammond organ, with trombone/brass handling the middle 8 sections. The backing features great guitar solo work by Jack Pearson and tasty acoustic guitar backing by Brent Mason. There is also some nice organ accompaniment by Jeff Young and beautiful pedal steel by Steve Hinson. I would be grateful if you would give Lazy Dayz a couple of 'playz'. As always, comments, criticism and suggestions are encouraged. Thanks, Mike THE BAND: RT2622:Organ, Rhythm FunkSwing16 Sw16 085 RealBass 533: Bass, Electric, 12-8 Crystal Sw 065 RT2674:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm Blues12-8Brent Sw 065 RealGuitar 627: Pedal Steel, Background 12-8 Crystal Sw 0 RealSoloist 422: Guitar, Electric, Soloist Blues Sw 120 (Jack Pearson) RealDrums-CountryShuffle128^7-Snare,Ride
Mike Garry BIAB 2022 (Build 927)/RealBand (5) (64bit), UltraPak, Kontakt, EZmix, Ozone 9 Elements, Hybrid 3, Audacity, Acer Predator, Windows 10, 64bit, 16GB ram, CPU: Intel i7. https://soundcloud.com/user-952388172
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Feb 2016
Posts: 1,677
Expert
|
|
Expert
Joined: Feb 2016
Posts: 1,677 |
Hi Mike,
for a blues lover like me this is a very enjoyable tune. Great choice of solos. Very nicely done!
Cheers,
Stefan
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Apr 2016
Posts: 6,311
Veteran
|
Veteran
Joined: Apr 2016
Posts: 6,311 |
It's begging for a vocal track Mike.
Cool stuff but the organ carried melody is REALLY disorienting as it pans. I love Leslie speakers and univibe rotation but that's a little weird for a melody.
Cool stuff though - and PLEASE drop a vocal on it.
Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712
Journeyman
|
|
OP
Journeyman
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712 |
Hi Mike,
for a blues lover like me this is a very enjoyable tune. Great choice of solos. Very nicely done!
Cheers,
Stefan Thanks Stefan. Always great to hear from you. Cheers, Mike
Mike Garry BIAB 2022 (Build 927)/RealBand (5) (64bit), UltraPak, Kontakt, EZmix, Ozone 9 Elements, Hybrid 3, Audacity, Acer Predator, Windows 10, 64bit, 16GB ram, CPU: Intel i7. https://soundcloud.com/user-952388172
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712
Journeyman
|
|
OP
Journeyman
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712 |
It's begging for a vocal track Mike.
Cool stuff but the organ carried melody is REALLY disorienting as it pans. I love Leslie speakers and univibe rotation but that's a little weird for a melody.
Cool stuff though - and PLEASE drop a vocal on it. Thanks mate for your suggestion re vocal track but there are two problems: 1) I'm not a singer 2) I'm not a lyricist But you might be right; despite local friends and family describing Lazy Dayz as one of my best songs/arrangements, it's only received a couple of views and plays since I put it up on User Showcase a couple of days ago. Ah well, back to the drawing board. Cheers, and thanks again, Mike
Mike Garry BIAB 2022 (Build 927)/RealBand (5) (64bit), UltraPak, Kontakt, EZmix, Ozone 9 Elements, Hybrid 3, Audacity, Acer Predator, Windows 10, 64bit, 16GB ram, CPU: Intel i7. https://soundcloud.com/user-952388172
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Sep 2016
Posts: 2,360
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Sep 2016
Posts: 2,360 |
Hello Mike,
This is a nice song to feel yourself lazy as can be! Very nice sologuitar, but also good playing of the other instruments. that makes this a good song. But... as Ray wrote it needs vocals in it!
To me you don't need to go back to the drawing board as you wrote, the song sounds really good. Well... maybe some more bass, a stronger melody for the piano, greater percussion and louder sologuitar (no, I'm joking!). It is a good song, only those vocals...
Hans
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Nov 2007
Posts: 5,193
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Nov 2007
Posts: 5,193 |
Hi Mike,
I gave it a couple of "playz", I listened yesterday too but didn't have time to comment.
I see a few people mentioned adding vocals. I'm like you, I don't sing and I'm not that great at writing lyrics. I have done lots of instrumentals in the past, at one time that's all I did, and I find it works best if you keep them short, around 3:00 or so. Hard to keep up listener interest with an instrumental if you go much longer than that in my opinion.
Overall a well arranged song, enjoyed the listen.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Feb 2017
Posts: 3,414
PG Music Staff
|
|
PG Music Staff
Joined: Feb 2017
Posts: 3,414 |
Nicely done! Love that classic blues vibe here, and the hint of country influence works well too. I can imagine a singer doing some justice to it for sure, but I definitely think it holds its weight as an instrumental as well. Great work and thanks for sharing 
Cheers,
Deryk
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jun 2000
Posts: 1,944
Expert
|
|
Expert
Joined: Jun 2000
Posts: 1,944 |
Great tracks Mike...
I enjoy it as is...
Buuuut...
I agree with others about a vocal track...
There's a lot of talented songwriters & musicians around here...
Ever thought about adding a line to your post...
"Any songwriting, lyrics, & vocal collaborations would be greatly appreciated"...
Jim
†=☮&♥
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2013
Posts: 2,732
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2013
Posts: 2,732 |
I agree with Ray on this one: The organ carried melody is REALLY disorienting as it pans. I love Leslie speakers and univibe rotation but that's a little weird for a melody. Other than that little nitpick, I'm good with it. Love the guitar songs on the track and they are mixed in nicely. Keep up the good work Mike!
 Steve BIAB/RB 2022, Pro Tools 2020, Korg N5, JBL LSR 4328 Powered Monitors, AKG/Shure Mics.
PC: Win11 PRO, 4 TB M2 SSD, 2 TB HD, 128 GB Memory
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jul 2015
Posts: 5,291
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Jul 2015
Posts: 5,291 |
Mike, great job mixing this with your own instrumentation! It's a cool track! I love this bluesy vibe in this! At some point maybe a lyric/vocal could be added but still enjoyed as is! Love that instrumentation build up later in song with horn sounds! Thanks, Torrey
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 11,777
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 11,777 |
Mike,
A good listen. Tasty stuff happening all over the place. Well mixed.
You keep it interesting throughout.
fj
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2018
Posts: 151
Apprentice
|
|
Apprentice
Joined: Dec 2018
Posts: 151 |
Sweet guitar playing. I'm feeling it. Tasty. Great tone.
Cakewalk Sonar Platinum
Focusrite 18i20
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 7,604
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 7,604 |
Wow loved the intro to this. Got me to sit up straight. Loved this tune. The organ was awesome. Excellent guitar track as well. Well done
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jun 2012
Posts: 18,475
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Jun 2012
Posts: 18,475 |
I didn't quite know what to expect, but was totally impressed with what I heard.
You nailed the blues here, no question.
BIAB & RB2024 Win.(Audiophile), Sonar Platinum, Cakewalk by Bandlab, Izotope Prod.Bundle, Roland RD-1000, Synthogy Ivory, Kontakt, Focusrite 18i20, KetronSD2, NS40M Monitors, Pioneer Active Monitors, AKG K271 Studio H'phones
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712
Journeyman
|
|
OP
Journeyman
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712 |
Hello Mike,
This is a nice song to feel yourself lazy as can be! Very nice sologuitar, but also good playing of the other instruments. that makes this a good song. But... as Ray wrote it needs vocals in it!
To me you don't need to go back to the drawing board as you wrote, the song sounds really good. Well... maybe some more bass, a stronger melody for the piano, greater percussion and louder sologuitar (no, I'm joking!). It is a good song, only those vocals...
Hans Thanks Hans for your encouraging words. I actually started trying to write words for Lazy Dayz today. Hopefully going “public” with my attempt to write lyrics will force me to persevere. Watch this space. Thanks again for listening, Mike
Mike Garry BIAB 2022 (Build 927)/RealBand (5) (64bit), UltraPak, Kontakt, EZmix, Ozone 9 Elements, Hybrid 3, Audacity, Acer Predator, Windows 10, 64bit, 16GB ram, CPU: Intel i7. https://soundcloud.com/user-952388172
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712
Journeyman
|
|
OP
Journeyman
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712 |
Hi Mike,
I gave it a couple of "playz", I listened yesterday too but didn't have time to comment.
I see a few people mentioned adding vocals. I'm like you, I don't sing and I'm not that great at writing lyrics. I have done lots of instrumentals in the past, at one time that's all I did, and I find it works best if you keep them short, around 3:00 or so. Hard to keep up listener interest with an instrumental if you go much longer than that in my opinion.
Overall a well arranged song, enjoyed the listen. Thanks Dave. I have started trying to write a lyric for Lazy Dayz. I'm not sure how I'll go but i'll persevere for a while. I had a few reservations about the length of the song but to be honest I didn't want to cut anything out. Thanks for your considered comments. Much appreciated as always. Cheers, Mike
Mike Garry BIAB 2022 (Build 927)/RealBand (5) (64bit), UltraPak, Kontakt, EZmix, Ozone 9 Elements, Hybrid 3, Audacity, Acer Predator, Windows 10, 64bit, 16GB ram, CPU: Intel i7. https://soundcloud.com/user-952388172
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Nov 2007
Posts: 5,193
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Nov 2007
Posts: 5,193 |
Hi Mike,
I gave it a couple of "playz", I listened yesterday too but didn't have time to comment.
I see a few people mentioned adding vocals. I'm like you, I don't sing and I'm not that great at writing lyrics. I have done lots of instrumentals in the past, at one time that's all I did, and I find it works best if you keep them short, around 3:00 or so. Hard to keep up listener interest with an instrumental if you go much longer than that in my opinion.
Overall a well arranged song, enjoyed the listen. Thanks Dave. I have started trying to write a lyric for Lazy Dayz. I'm not sure how I'll go but i'll persevere for a while. I had a few reservations about the length of the song but to be honest I didn't want to cut anything out. Thanks for your considered comments. Much appreciated as always. Cheers, Mike Hey Mike, We have done a couple where I wrote the lyrics. It's very difficult (for me) but in theory the more you do it the easier it comes  Looking forward to hearing what you come up with!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712
Journeyman
|
|
OP
Journeyman
Joined: Jan 2017
Posts: 712 |
Nicely done! Love that classic blues vibe here, and the hint of country influence works well too. I can imagine a singer doing some justice to it for sure, but I definitely think it holds its weight as an instrumental as well. Great work and thanks for sharing Thanks Deryk, especially for the "instrumental" comment. I love the Steve Hinson pedal steel RealTrack. It adds such nice touches throughout. Cheers, Mike
Mike Garry BIAB 2022 (Build 927)/RealBand (5) (64bit), UltraPak, Kontakt, EZmix, Ozone 9 Elements, Hybrid 3, Audacity, Acer Predator, Windows 10, 64bit, 16GB ram, CPU: Intel i7. https://soundcloud.com/user-952388172
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 5,541
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 5,541 |
Mike,
Nice mix and it arrangement.
A tad long for an instrumental but interesting all the way through.
Well done.
Peter
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Ask sales and support questions about Band-in-a-Box using natural language.
ChatPG's knowledge base includes the full Band-in-a-Box User Manual and sales information from the website.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 Italian for Windows is Here!
Ci siamo dati da fare e abbiamo aggiunto oltre 50 nuove funzionalità e una straordinaria raccolta di nuovi contenuti, tra cui 222 RealTracks, nuovi RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, "Songs with Vocals" Artist Performance Sets, Playable RealTracks Set 3, Playable RealDrums Set 2, due nuovi set di "RealDrums Stems", XPro Styles PAK 6, Xtra Styles PAK 17 e altro ancora!
Tutti Pacchetti | Nuove Caratteristiche
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 French for Windows is Here!
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 apporte plus de 50 fonctions nouvelles ainsi qu'une importante de contenus nouveaux à savoir : 222 RealTracks, des RealStyles nouveaux, des SuperTracks MIDI, des Etudes d'Instruments, des Prestations d'Artistes, des "Morceaux avec Choeurs", un Set 3 de Tracks Jouables, un Set 2 de RealDrums Jouables, deux nouveaux Sets de "RealDrums Stems", des Styles XPro PAK 6, des Xtra Styles PAK 17 et bien plus encore!
Tous Packages | Nouvelles Fonctionnalités
Video: Making a Song with Band-in-a-Box®, ChatGPT, and Synth V
Take your Band-in-a-Box® project to a whole new level when you incorporate ChatGPT and Synth V to add lyrics and vocals to your song!
We wanted to demonstrate how this is done with our video, where we show you how to go from nothing to a finished "radio ready" modern pop song by combining the features of Band-in-a-Box®, ChatGPT, and Synth V!
Listen to the finished song, so you get a listen to the finished product: https://demos.pgmusic.com/misc/behindthefame.m4a
If you like it, watch the video. Either way, let's hear your comments!
Henry Clarke: Revolutionize Your Band-in-Box® Tracks with Regenerating Function
User Video: Next-Level AI Music Editing with ACE Studio and Band-in-a-Box®
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 German for Windows is Here!
Band-in-a-Box® 2024 für Windows Deutsch ist verfügbar!
Wir waren fleißig und haben über 50 neue Funktionen und eine erstaunliche Sammlung neuer Inhalte hinzugefügt, darunter 222 RealTracks, neue RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, "Songs with Vocals" Artist Performance Sets, abspielbare RealTracks Set 3, abspielbare RealDrums Set 2, zwei neue Sets von "RealDrums Stems", XPro Styles PAK 6, Xtra Styles PAK 17 und mehr!
Paket | Was ist Neu
Update Your PowerTracks Pro Audio 2024 Today!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Forums66
Topics81,923
Posts738,899
Members38,620
| |
Most Online2,537
Jan 19th, 2020
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Dansk
Deutsch - Windows
Español
Français - Windows
Italiano - Windows
Nederlands
Polski
Português
Svenskt
русский
Japanese
Simplified Chinese
Traditional Chinese
Korean