Originally Posted By: rayc
Sounds like a desert symphony - Joshua Tree lightning rods et al.
Nice one.


Ok,maybe the cinematic guitars have that atmosphere.
Thanks for listening.



Originally Posted By: PeterF
Robert

Extremely atmospheric, and a very nice overall production.
No surprise the lyrics were top notch and the vocal was assured and nicely done.

An impressive piece of song writing.

Peter


Thank you Peter!

Originally Posted By: Crossroads
Hi Robert,

where to begin...?

The most interesting combination of the beautiful melody and that RealStyle - terrific!

A great write - really caught me.

VERY well-sung !

Awesome !

Take care,

Stefan


Stefan,

I appreciate those positives!


Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Excellent intro! Sounded great through the 'phones.

I always enjoy your lyrics, and I like your vocal too, the falsetto you added to "dry" and "Lisa" is cool.

The lightning fx at the end was a nice touch.

Enjoyed!


Dave,
I enjoyed finding I could carry that bit of falsetto!
Thanks for your likes.

Originally Posted By: Teletwanger
Very calming. Love the chord changes. Deep.


My thanks -also to my wife for keeping her depths hidden for me to discover!


Originally Posted By: jannesan
Nice backstory leads to the excellent song title. And then starts the super intro, those cinematic guitars really fit the mood. Later the congas join in nicely.

Dynamic melody with nice leaps. Great chording, especially in the beginning of the catchy chorus.

Lyrically full of great images like "should have known the quit ones keep their powder dry", I really enjoy the story, you are really a gifted songwriter with original ideas smile

Janne



Janne,
I`m happy you heard the and liked the chords I used for the chorus- worked hard to bring some drama there.
Very kind comments-thank you!

Robert