Originally Posted By: VideoTrack
I really like the way you captured the darkness of the underlying theme.
Interesting chord progressions that worked well to further exemplify the story being delivered.
Moreover, the ending certainly indicated that there is 'no end in sight' for the situation.
Definitely well portrayed.

Thanks Videotrack,
The narrative came into my scone almost fully formed.
It was a quick scrawl to get it down.
the chords were inspired by the cheapo spring reverb pedal mentioned. Certain chords ring through well, some choke and otters get muddy so the tool was the sorting hat!

Cheers
rayc
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