The intro, 1st phrase and delay/panning are very Pink Floyd DSOTM Us us us us & Them them them them...
That's not a bad thing.
Who's what & where?
Lyrics'd be nice too.
The vocal is great - intimate and in front but there're a couple of sibilant spots that could be addressed to enhance the intimacy.
COOL.


Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe